tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post111933438244186264..comments2023-09-23T04:56:51.617-07:00Comments on Forensics & Faith: Editing Day 6--Sentence Rhythm/Tight Writing~ Brandilyn Collinshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04771812607327238979noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post-1119491029420278832005-06-22T18:43:00.000-07:002005-06-22T18:43:00.000-07:00Thanks, Brandilyn. I feel like I now understand SR...Thanks, Brandilyn. I feel like I now understand SR better. GIC explains it well, but seeing it here--kinda like I'm at a workshop you're teaching--reinforces the concept.Camy Tanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14577747925320907186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post-1119409308548135952005-06-21T20:01:00.000-07:002005-06-21T20:01:00.000-07:00Absolutely wonderful! I've read GIC, but could alw...Absolutely wonderful! I've read GIC, but could always use a refresher.<BR/><BR/>I agree that this will help critique group members work on weaknesses instead of changing the voice.Dominohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05698502437170233088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post-1119397196795163182005-06-21T16:39:00.000-07:002005-06-21T16:39:00.000-07:00Using real-life examples like this is tremendously...Using real-life examples like this is tremendously helpful. Just like your Bustin the Backstory workshop. All the PowerPoints in the world don't make up for one practical work-trough like this. Thanks much!Richhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16242241896865897319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post-1119369730614640862005-06-21T09:02:00.000-07:002005-06-21T09:02:00.000-07:00Your explanations are excellent, Brandilyn. Thanks...Your explanations are excellent, Brandilyn. Thanks for covering the sentence variation issue.<BR/><BR/>I also really appreciate your emphasis on the fact that this now has your voice and is not to be looked at as "THE right way." I think that is a point all of us in critique groups must learn.Rebecca LuElla Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06823550402103559922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post-1119368379858213342005-06-21T08:39:00.000-07:002005-06-21T08:39:00.000-07:00Good stuff!Maybe this is something we could all pr...Good stuff!<BR/><BR/>Maybe this is something we could all practice over on the discussion board.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for explaining it point by point like that. Now to go read Ch 6 in Gic and then supercharge my action!<BR/><BR/>Thanks!Stuarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01319201996699675786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post-1119361779573829792005-06-21T06:49:00.000-07:002005-06-21T06:49:00.000-07:00This is one element I love about your books. THe ...This is one element I love about your books. THe action flows so well and as a reader I feel sucked into it. Now if I could only learn how to apply this technique to my writing.<BR/><BR/>How did you first apply this to your writing? Do you write a section and then in the rewrite focus on sentence rhythm?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post-1119357562621593692005-06-21T05:39:00.000-07:002005-06-21T05:39:00.000-07:00I learn so much here Monday through Friday. When t...I learn so much here Monday through Friday. When the weekend comes, I'm actually a little disappointed because I won't get my morning writing instruction.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com