tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post112054816508562480..comments2023-09-23T04:56:51.617-07:00Comments on Forensics & Faith: Editing, Day 15--Character Motivation~ Brandilyn Collinshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04771812607327238979noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post-1120701817204134562005-07-06T19:03:00.000-07:002005-07-06T19:03:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Dineen A. Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08560463944362266736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post-1120586143435371062005-07-05T10:55:00.000-07:002005-07-05T10:55:00.000-07:00I didn't even notice the lack of a decisive though...I didn't even notice the lack of a decisive thought until you mentioned it, so it obviously works well the way you wrote it. Her thoughts gradually shift through memory, and we're there with her. We don't need to be told she would take "no more". The physical reaction of her blood burning is hint enough.Tina Helmuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02210602508259810567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10583449.post-1120568340721163662005-07-05T05:59:00.000-07:002005-07-05T05:59:00.000-07:00Happy July 5th. I looked through the archives and...Happy July 5th. I looked through the archives and didn't see anything on backstory other than a mention that it is critical and many authors mess it up. <BR/><BR/>And I love the way you added so much meaning to her unspoken decision to fight. It added to her motivation by highlighting the history that led to this encounter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com